Or to invite people into a new one :)
Houseofoliviereu
joined 1 week ago
That: "such as one morning when I woke up just as the sun hit the perfect angle off a mirror and onto my eyelashes, to cause a cascade of rainbows right in my eyes. Just a few days ago I was lucky enough to enjoy a very unusual weather combination, where it was raining fairly hard at the same time as a very hot sun was in a clear part of the sky. The combination of cool rain and hot sun at the same time was very odd, but greatly enjoyable while exercising." that is something nicely written. I could really imagine the situation. You should keep going on with that thought. To write something about that.
There is more in the world, but I think [a slight derivation of the topic, sorry] we (general) do not take enough time to appreciate as we have to keep going on with our life. Maybe, just to make a small pause can help. I stop here cuz I think I will write a whole novel 😂
Indeed, you went mystic but it is refreshing :). On the "potentially forcefully and against their will" [I hope, I will express correctly ;It depends which creativity. One can still ignore the creativity of a group, of a person. Even if, then, it is everywhere. There is still free of will (generally speaking).
Regarding your last point, I think, there is always a breaking point which pushes the limits somewhere to the right direction or to the wrong, it is, I think a 50/50.
I know.. I push myself a lot not to go but it is hard as I think. I have put that moment as an enjoyable one. But no worries. I will have more work in the upcoming weeks so I will not go that so often....
It became an addiction. It helps to relax. Not a gym rat. But almost. Need to go everyday. Far away to have those extra big muscles. But the "legs day" are..... horrible.... It hurts a lot...
Thank you so much 😁
It is perfectly clear 😁
I have some work to do now...
Thank you so much. I am so happy for the feedback. First, I want to apologize for the lack of pages. When I split my PDF it showed me 20 but yeah... It counted the cover etc.
About: I’m not sure I’m going to articulate this properly, but the writing switches between narration (all knowing) and 3rd person POV a few times. What do you mean? I do not understand sorry :(
General question: Do you think it is important to know the age of the person? What I wanted to do/convey is: talking a bit less about physical trait of the characters but more about the mind, psyche of the characters. So, anyone can identify to the characters easily (if I "remove" the physical part ; including age). Maybe, it is too "conceptual".
I must admit I have hard time with Mira. I wanted her to be the adventurer type the "Let's do this ; let's go" type but also she needs to forecast things like a planner type (If I can say like that) otherwise, she panics. But not so helpless like that lol That is ok. I will rework.
For the side questions. I laughed as yeah for me it made sense but for someone else.. yeah.. maybe not.
Thank you :) A summary (if you see something bad as hell you can put it in line comment) please so it is not eating up your time. Link: https://houseofoliviereu.com/download/2617/?tmstv=1747929217 (it is in PDF) You can be a bit direct I am ok with that and ready to hear it. Thank you so much, more than appreciated.
Greetings, The "you do you" is part of 😺's nature. We do we. Humans do humans. We have still instinct from the Old times. The food was good but maybe too smelly. Need to hide it. Even though, there is no sand. Little rugs? In general, we love little things so that we can play. Dont forget to play with ur little ones! 😺
I see what you mean now at 100%. I might have understood, before, slightly different meaning. And yes, when, for example, you are at a bar, or somewhere where they put music or pieces of art (paintaings, etc). Yes, you can see/hear and you feel whatever you feel at that moment.