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Poetry

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A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.


Welcome to !poetry


Guidelines & Community Rules

In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:

Published Poetry

1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.

O.C. Poetry

2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."

2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay

Feedback

All feedback should be given in good faith.

3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.

3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.

3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind to another author. Everyone appreciates knowing their work is being read and appreciated.

As this community develops, these guidelines may be adjusted.


Formatting Help
Work in progress

To create a line break, use two spaces at the end of a line.

To create empty space, type  . Use four of these at the beginning of a line to create a standard indent.

UPDATE:
Some methods of access do not format markdown correctly. I am currently testing various apps and web interfaces to see what does and does not retain formatting.

In the interim, it is encouraged to post text poetry as you normally would, but to include a link at the beginning or end of the post with access to a website or image that retains the formatting as intended.


Other Poetry Communities
Poetry lovers unite! In the style of the fediverse, multiple poetry communities have arisen, and will continue to rise. I will try to keep a list here of communities across instances that are worth checking out!


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[–] Coelacanth@feddit.nu 7 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Fine then. I guess I will.

(Also I love me some Dorothy Parker).

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 4 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Me too! And yeah I'm not exactly great but I'll do my best.

[–] coronach@lemmy.sdf.org 2 points 2 days ago

Same here. Might as well.

[–] pixeltree@lemmy.blahaj.zone 3 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Gonna grab me a helium tank, a heavy duty garbage bag, and some gorilla tape when I finally can't take it anymore

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 2 points 2 days ago

Not bad. I've just saved pill upon pill.

[–] DarkNightoftheSoul@mander.xyz 0 points 2 days ago* (last edited 2 days ago) (2 children)

i admit it. im stuck on 'pain' as a verb, it just doesnt work. hurt is right there, and its not interrupting the syllable count or rhyme scheme.

edit: I'll be goddamned. Apparently "pain" can be a verb. I guess I have heard "it pains me to say" now I think of it.

[–] rayquetzalcoatl@lemmy.world 3 points 2 days ago* (last edited 2 days ago) (2 children)

It didn't stick out to me as unusual at all - is it another British English vs other forms of English thing? Parker was American so I'd be surprised

[–] Skua@kbin.earth 3 points 2 days ago

British English is my first language and it didn't stick out to me as too unusual. Maybe if there's a difference in the usage of it today, it's one that has developed since Parker's death?

[–] coronach@lemmy.sdf.org 1 points 2 days ago

American here. We definitely use it as a verb, most commonly as "it pains me to say..." It isn't too common an expression, though, which might have been the oddity for the GP.

[–] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 1 points 2 days ago

Yeah it does stick out a bit.