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I really enjoyed stoner and the simplistic prose and it has been my favorite book for a while. But on the other hand I really love lolita and lotr style of poetic sounding prose and is the kind of style I like to write.

Examples from my own writing:

"The emptiness of exclusion looms like a shadow, constantly reminding me of my fragile place in the world."

"Savory scents swirl in the air, nourishing both the tongue and the soul with every bite of culinary delight."

"Grief whispers in the wind, a haunting melody of what once was and what will never be again."

"She loved him with all her heart. She fought for him with all her might. She lost him to the shadows of his mind." This ones a non poetic example.

I'd love to hear some of your favorite written sentences and preffered style while writing or what you enjoy reading most.

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[–] Lacanoodle 2 points 11 months ago

Oh that's nice. I struggle with that particular style of writing and get lost trying to figure it out and lose fluid reading ability.

With family trees Im just worried I'm gonna have to remember all this now lol.

I do love this shout out tho.