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[–] ComicalMayhem@lemmy.world 5 points 4 days ago

I actually loved this; it's so esoteric in all the right ways. I would read a book series set in this universe.

Special shout out to this line; "A wiry hand holding a mouse pointed at the back of a head." idk if you intended to evoke computer mouse imagery, but for me, the only thing I pictured was a literal live mouse pointed at the back of someone's head like a fucking weird ass wand, and I loved the imagery of that.