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[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 41 points 3 days ago (5 children)

"Streak, this is Eternus, our new member. He's a time manipulator of sorts."

"Good to know, General. How's it hanging, Eternus?"

Not fucking good, Jamie, not fucking good.

"Oh, I guess it's hanging fine enough. We'll have to see what the future holds."

Again.

[–] AwesomeLowlander@sh.itjust.works 13 points 3 days ago (1 children)

I have to say, this is the best writing prompt reply I've seen since I got on lemmy.

[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 4 points 2 days ago

Well damn! Thank you!

[–] ComicalMayhem@lemmy.world 5 points 2 days ago (1 children)

this is good shit right here. I'd read a sequel

[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 4 points 2 days ago

My kid has been telling me the same thing.

I kinda want to, because it's still in my head, but I don't know if it needs continuing. It might make it fall apart because it works with that as an ending.

[–] choss@sh.itjust.works 8 points 3 days ago (2 children)

Bravo, that was excellent! That felt like Worm

[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 4 points 2 days ago

That's pretty damn high praise

[–] SuperNovaStar@lemmy.blahaj.zone 4 points 3 days ago (1 children)

It really did! I would absolutely read a whole book of that! (Or dozens of them, if the length of Worm is any indication)

[–] choss@sh.itjust.works 4 points 2 days ago (1 children)

Haha, it's crazy finding another fan in the wild, it always felt like a small audience, but nope! 👋

No, it's actually pretty popular. Although nothing today is as mainstream as things used to be.

If you liked Worm, you might enjoy Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality (if you haven't read it already). It has some real similarities to Worm, including an unreliable narrator who is very intelligent, but can also be arrogant and impulsive. I'd also classify them both as "hard fantasy."

You can find it at hpmor.com if you're interested.

[–] Aussiemandeus@aussie.zone 10 points 3 days ago (1 children)

Man that was such a good read.

Well done

[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 14 points 3 days ago

Thanks :)

Ngl, I'm proud of this one. Even made my family listen to me read it lol

[–] recklessengagement@lemmy.world 3 points 3 days ago (1 children)

That was a great read. Is it from something?

[–] MaelGuerra@lemmy.world 5 points 2 days ago

My head.

I got lucky and the prompt inspired me fully. That's pretty rare, normally I just get an idea and then have to really work at it to get something readable. This was pure stream of consciousness.

I'm legit proud of it.