These are so, so good.
I think it's the eyebrow. Very very subtle but the angle is a hair different and can make the expression slightly different as well.
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These are so, so good.
I think it's the eyebrow. Very very subtle but the angle is a hair different and can make the expression slightly different as well.
Thank you!
Your best one yet
I think so too!
You're pretty amazing. Great work and really noticable improvement!
Thank you, I'm trying!
It's not his lips, I think it's his eyes, try making them a little more closed, he looks more wide eyed than in the reference
Thank you! I'm feeling pretty good about his left eye though 🤣
You got a point lmao, captured that emotion pretty spot on
The edges of his lips are downturned in the photo, but they're a bit upturned in your painting.
Also, his upper lip is stretched a little thinner in the photo, and pressed more tightly against the bottom lip.
I don't usually reply to these, but since you asked, figured I'd mention.
Thank you!
I haven’t commented in a while. Having skipped a few I can see a lot of difference between them and now. The color choices and blending looks so much smoother and more nuanced. Your lights and darks are looking more dynamic, but could use a bit more work, it’s ok to get really dark and to hide detail if the artwork calls for it (the bottom of the photo has the jacket and shirt almost too dark to see detail while the painting just a smidge too light in tonal value(dark vs light)). Keep up the fantastic work.
That's the biggest thing I saw when I painted it but decided not to try to change it with a filter or repaint it. But yeah it's for sure a big difference.
Agreed, finish a work and move forward. Don’t linger on something to get to “perfection”. Strive towards that in the next painting. These are always a delight to see, a bright spot in my day when things have gone sideways.
I'm glad to hear that and I hope for better days for you!
And agreed iteration is a big part of improvement. Trying to do as many as I can before I'm able to do my next live session. With luck the next model I paint will actually look like them.
It's, and I'm no artist, so forgive me if I'm wrong, the very ends of his lips. They go down in the original, but in your drawing, he's very slightly smiling, as the ends of his lips go up.
Still, very good drawing!
Thank you!